Read this passage:
I have had several years of experience in the electrical engineering field, and I haven’t been electrocuted once!
What common pitfall does this cover letter excerpt contain?
A.) the applicant appears selfish and self-centered
B.) The applicant is attempting to be humorous
C.) The applicant is overstating his or her qualifications
D.) The applicant is not using concrete language
The common pitfall that is shown in this cover letter is that the applicant is attempting to be funny, therefore, the correct answer is B. While humor is fun, there is a proper setting for it and a cover letter is not that particular place. It should be far more professional and factual.
